What’s Going On?
“She fed me
kadwe karele and a sweet dish made from neem leaves but maine bhi liya revenge
alarm clocks laga aaye room mein. You know Chetak, yeh musibat is such a
troublemaker but Shakti and Heer ki shaadi uski wajah se ho rahi toh am quiet
warna I tell you. Aaj I made chocolate brownies because of her only.... I mean
not her... Tum samajh rahe ho na?”
Chetak
neighed as Pratap soothed his friend’s mane while he told him about everything
that had been happening in his life. Riding him across the ground, Pratap felt
happy. Chetak was the only one Pratap spoke about his life to, knowing that his
four-legged friend was far more understanding and intelligent than many people
he personally knew and the most important connection he had with Chetak was
that Chetak was the last gift he had received from his late mother. He still
couldn’t understand why he had felt an irrational wave of anger run through his
veins when he had seen Ajabde hug Aafat and then the way she had stayed close
to him, and how they smiled at each other.
“Asli ki
fiance thodi na hai. Sab pretence hai Shakti aur Heer ke liye... tum kaun hote
ho to interfere in her life...” he tried
to reason with himself but he just couldn’t shake off how much she had began to
affect him and his reactions. Her smile was intoxicating, her doe eyes were like
magnets pulling one towards them, the hair was always swaying across her face
in the gentle breeze... how he wanted to...
“Dadabhai…Dadabhai
...wait for me!” Shakti came on his
horse Sarang bringing him out of his thoughts. “Let’s go for a ride Dadabhai “ Shakti
smiled . Both the brothers had just returned to the front lawn when they found
Heer, Ajabde and Jalal sitting together laughing over images he was showing on
his camera. They walked towards them with a frown on their faces on their
presence not being acknowledged by the girls. It was Chetak’s neigh that made
Heer look up from the camera.
“Dadabhai
aap waapis aa gaye chaliye ready ho jaayiye. We are all going out.” Pratap
looked at his brother and then back at Heer who was beaming with excitement.
“Going out?
but Heer...” Shakti started knowing his
brother might not want to go out but Pratap surprised him by nodding his head.
“Seriously
yes?” Heer asked as a surprised Ajabdeh looked up at him.
“Haan.” His
eyes travelled from Heer to her as she looked away. But before he could leave
Ajabde got up.
“Excuse me
Kunwarsa.” Her voice made Heer Shakti and Jalal stare a little amused at her
serious tone.
“Yes,
Ajabdeh?” He copied smiling inwardly.
“I am
sorry.” She said it as fast as she could in front of the clueless crowd. “I
shouldn’t have said like I said at the study and...”
“Thank you.”
His voice made her stare surprised.
“Kya?”
“Thank you,
I needed that.” He smiled with a nod as Ajabde smirked.
“Main toh
hamesha se janti hoon kya sahi hai aur jo main karti hamesha sahi hi hota hai!!
Main toh hoon hi aisi koi kya kar sakta hai!”
“Lo palti!”
Jalal laughed as Heer and Shakti Joined.
“Haan, jaise
kal raat ko kitchen mein bhi tumne sahi hi kia.” Pratap turned to leave as she
gasped. “Jasoos kahika!” He walked away in his victory smile as Shakti followed
in toe.
“Dadabhai
agar aapka mann nahi hai toh...” Shakti tried to speak but Pratap ruffled his
hair smiling.
“Heer ko
dekha kitni excited and khush hai waise bhi yeh trip uske liye hi toh hai
Shakti. Besides dinner ke liye toh jaana hi tha bahaar ...” but before Pratap
could finish his younger brother hugged him tight. Ever since Phool fiasco his
brother had turned into a mega introvert rarely going out for fun but he would
do everything for his loved ones. His agreeing to go out was all for Heer whom
he considered as a younger sister made Shakti feel overwhelmed.
Raja Hemant
Solankhini smiled at his genius plan as he slowly walked out of the hotel room
he had earlier checked-in to. He looked at his phone that he was using to track
the whereabouts of his daughter who currently was in the Songara farmhouse.
“I have time
for a cup of tea and snack uske baad I will check on you Heer!”
The man made
his way to the restaurant and at the same time Rani Meera along with her Daima
entered the lobby of the hotel to check into their own room.
“Daima aaj
hum bhi adventure kar rahe hain” Meera’s excitement on being a detective was
finally coming true and her excitement and enthusiasm made her Daima smile but
she knew there would be trouble when both husband-wife would come face to face!
Pratap
stepped out dressed in his comfortable casuals only to catch a glimpse of
Ajabde Punwar dressed in a red knee length body con dress along with a black
leather jacket and black ankle high heel boots. Her hair was left open and she
looked absolutely ravishing. Ajabde pouted as she took yet another selfie when
she saw Pratap standing in the corridor, he sighed when she whistled at him.
“Hello
handsome!” she smiled while walking towards him. Pratap felt something was
different about her the way she was speaking, acting, looking all hot was normal
to him but it was her eyes ... they were sparkling, full of life and were no
longer guarded rather they beamed happiness. He was jostled out of his thoughts
when she grabbed him by the arm and pulled him towards her.
“Smile
Kunwarsa” she angled the phone to click a selfie of the two but made a face
when she didn’t like it. He took the phone from her hand.
“I’ll take a
far better one after all ab pic leni hai toh acchi aani chahiye” he smiled as
they both looked at the camera and that was how Heer, Shakti and Jalal found
them – standing close to each other clicking selfies.
“Arey wahan
kya kar rahe ho yahan aao sab...groupie lete hai” Ajabde exclaimed and everyone
joined in with a smile.
An hour
later they all sat in the corner of a cosy little karaoke pub that belonged to
Pratap’s friend Chakrapani urf Chaks as everyone called him. Chaks had been
ecstatic on meeting his friend after such a long time ever since Maharanisa’s
demise Pratap had shut himself and post the Phool fiasco he had turned into a
recluse rarely meeting his friends or going out, all he did was work and work
so to meet and hug him made Chakrapani very happy. As he served them all drinks
he sat by his friend when Jalal asked him about the karaoke and then a sly
smile came on his face.
“Ab jo hoga
uske baad Humko free drinks dena” he stood up and pulled Ajabde by her elbow.
Everyone stared at them with curious eyes as both the friends walked up on
stage.
“Let’s karaoke
everyone!!!”
10 minutes
later everyone was holding their stomach laughing hard seeing Jalal and Ajabde
totally destroy Bollywood songs. From Raja Hindustaani to Himesh Reshammiya’s
surooooor they killed every melody, none of them could sing but did every trick
available to win the competition and their antics made everyone laugh. Both
Jalal and Ajabde joined back the group amidst loud cheer and claps seeing them
finally get-off the stage. Heer had tears in her eyes from all the laughing and
even Shakti was still trying to control his laughter but failing miserably. All
the while Pratap had done nothing but drown drink upon drink seeing her laugh
so carefree with Jalal, share a sizzling chemistry and hold hands looking eye
to eye.
“Mere saath
kyun na hasti yeh aise, am a coold guy and can sing far better than him.”
Seeing them both return holding hands made him drown another drink. The hard
liquor burned down the throat as he took it in one go.
“I swear”
Chaks began “maine aaj tak kisiko bhi itna besura gaana gaate nahi suna jitna
tum ne gaaya.” Jalal feigned hurt while Ajabde started to act like the
Bollywood movie heroines all dramatic with hand gestures.
“Waah re
zaalim tere pyaar mein hum bane Anuradha Paudwaal aur tumne Humko hi besura bol
diya. Tod diya aaj tumne mera masoom sa dil....”
Her
dialogues made everyone laugh harder while Pratap just shook his head as he
played with his re-filled glass of drink.
“But you
know what” Jalal spoke “jitna besura gaati hai utna hi bhayanak dance karti hai
and ab jab drinks ho chuke hain gaane bhi gaa liye toh baari dance ki hai....”
Ajabde stared
right at Pratap who seemed to be in a totally different world all together,
stirring his drink.
“Kyun
Kunwarsa ho jaaye ek dance?” She smirked.
“I…” he
looked up at the hopeful eyes, and her’s “I don’t dance.” Pratap spoke his
recluse persona coming back but Ajabde had seen Shakti and Heer give each other
looks and knew what she had to do...
“I dare you
Kunwar Pratap Singh Songara!” she stood up with a sly smile on her face “mere
saath ek dance and Chaks decide karega ki hum dono mein se accha kaun hai. If I
win you promise to not oppose me taking Chetak out without informing you and
agar aap jeete toh you can make me do 1 task anytime, anywhere you want...”
Pratap
looked at her questioningly only to meet her challenging gaze,
“Koi nahi
Kunwarsa if you are scared I’ll dance with Jalal.” she spoke only to see Pratap
down his drink in one go.
“Rajput hoon
darta nahi aur naa hi haarta hoon. Hope you are ready Ajabde ?” He spoke and
pulled her by her hand towards the floor making everyone stare surprised as
Jalal smiled sipping his drink.
Four pair of
eyes looked at the dance floor when both Ajabde and Pratap took to it as music
played. He pulled her closer as his hands went to her waist while she placed
her hands on his shoulders as the melody began to fill the small room their
bodies started to groove on their own.
Behke behke nain, cheenay dil ka chain
Toh yeh pyaar hai,
Koi intezaar karde bekaraar
Toh yeh pyaar hai...
Toh yeh pyaar hai,
Koi intezaar karde bekaraar
Toh yeh pyaar hai...
People moved away as Pratap held Ajabde’s waist close.
“Salsa?” He smiled.
“Ohho? Can You?” She dared, eyes not leaving his...
“Try me!”
Yaadein, dil ko tadpayein
Saansein, ulajti jaaye
Aankhein, sapne dikhlaye
Jab anjaane
Aankhon, se tu gabhraye
Raaton, mein so na paaye
Haathon, ko malta jaaye
Tu deewane
Hote hote ....oh yeah
Ho jaane do na pyaar!
Saansein, ulajti jaaye
Aankhein, sapne dikhlaye
Jab anjaane
Aankhon, se tu gabhraye
Raaton, mein so na paaye
Haathon, ko malta jaaye
Tu deewane
Hote hote ....oh yeah
Ho jaane do na pyaar!
They were
both doing the salsa lost in each other’s gaze, endearing smiles unaware of the
many mobiles that were capturing there awesome dance routine. Even Jalal,
Chaks, Shakti and Heer were stunned at the fabulous dance performance.
“This is a
takkar waali Jodi” someone spoke up as Ajabde’s did a twirl and landed in
Pratap’s arms His hands played like the keys of a piano on her waist making her
smile. Every twirl, dip, shake of the waist had them both ignite each other so
badly. It was pure passion that was coming out in form of the dance!
Dhoondti hai nazar, ik haseen ko agar
Koi armaan leke
Toh prem mein nagar ki taraf hai safar
Dil ka sauda leke
Pighla sa pighla sa ho ju mann
Sundar sa sundar sa ho ju tann
Dil jo dhadakte hain shole bhadakte hain, hosh toh khota hai, pyaar jab hota hai
Hote hote ....oh yeah
Ho jaane do na pyaar!!
Koi armaan leke
Toh prem mein nagar ki taraf hai safar
Dil ka sauda leke
Pighla sa pighla sa ho ju mann
Sundar sa sundar sa ho ju tann
Dil jo dhadakte hain shole bhadakte hain, hosh toh khota hai, pyaar jab hota hai
Hote hote ....oh yeah
Ho jaane do na pyaar!!
Pratap and
Ajabde were completely and utterly lost in each other. Their hands were
traveling the bodies igniting all nerve endings and they never once broke their
eye contact. As the song came to an end the huge round of applause broke them
apart. Pratap suddenly realised their position and all of a sudden took two
steps away from her as per propriety. Ajabde on the other hand tried hard to
control her crazy heart that was beating way too fast. The entire dance
performance for her felt like a surreal dream... she never had a partner who
was this amazingly well-trained and every step with Pratap came naturally to
her. His hands on her waist felt so comfortable but as soon as he took those
two steps away from her she also stepped back. Girls looked at him dreamily and
some took the courage to speak to him.
Seeing the
girls try to flirt and him returning their attention made her blood boil and
she excused herself and went to the washroom before she did something drastic.
Inside the washroom she splashed her face with cold water trying to get out of
her reverie.
Kyun tum itna effect kar rahe ho
mujhe Kharus Kunwar? Kyun tumhaare closeness mereko drunk feel karaati hai?
Kyun jab tum kisi aur girl se flirt karte ho to mereko lagta hai jaise koi
volcano burst ho raha ho? Humaare beech
aisa hai kya jo I feel so attarcted towards you…am I in…Nahi Ajabde this is...
no…. Tum sirf Heer aur Shakti ke help kar rahi ho…remember usne kya kaha tha...
I’m a stranger merely helping them
out aur mujhe meri limits mein rehna chahiye but why do I feel this weird uske
aas paas...
She
wiped her face with the tissue staring at her reflection in the mirror. His
moves, his scent, his closeness all sent a raging sensation down her body she
had never experienced before.
The door of
the washroom was swung opened as Pratap entered, his sudden appearance made
Ajabde gasp as she turned. Somehow with him inside the washroom the place felt
smaller while he seemed so big, his sleeves were folded, his collar was a bit
crooked, the top button of his shirt was open but it was his eyes that captured
her gaze.
“I was
looking all over for you.” He frowned his voice a little cutely gibberish coz
he was drunk.
“Tum…yeh…girl’s
ka…washroom hai ...” she stammered but Pratap seemed different. He took two
huge steps and pressed her against the wall
“That’s it.”
He stepped towards her, eyes not leaving her’s as she felt cornered.
“Huh?”
Ajabde’s heart thumped louder than usual as he neared her, his gaze so serious
that it scared her.
“I’m done
fighting this feeling.” He cornered her some more as the tissue fell from her
hand.
“Huh?”
The next
thing Ajabde could comprehend was Pratap kissing her. His frame covered her
body completely it was like they were both perfect puzzle pieces meant to be
together. Her eyes closed of their own accord as his hands traveled down her
back then her waist before one traveled to move back up towards her hair.
Their lips moved in complete sync and before she knew Pratap had tilted her
head deepening the kiss. Both of them were so lost they didn’t hear the gasp or
the closing of the door behind them. He held her head closer by his hand on her
hair while hers traveled to hold his collar then the nape of his neck, as they
kissed passionately breathless; sinking in to all the feelings they had never
felt before. It felt like at this moment, here, right now, was everything
“Completeness” stood for.
And My Fav Part is Here!!! - Coauthor's note :)
ReplyDeleteThis is just the beginning of your fav part :P
Deleteamazing to see jealous pratap and ajabde and their romance .... love the update.... waiting for the next part
ReplyDelete:) thank you
DeleteWoahhhhh dammn where was I all this while!!! This is such a beautiful story and this update was so damn sizzling! I legit read it 3-4 times especially the last part! Gosh itna saara pyaar aur passion handle nahi hota :p
ReplyDeleteI love pratap's characterisation as well as heer and shakti. Ajabdeh is also so appealing but I feel she is too perfect as compared to reality so I would really want to see her as a normal girl who doubts herself, considers her life choices with skepticism, gets scared and complicates herself. Matlab ekta kapoor jaisa nahi ki bhai sab ko pata hae pyaar hae but usko nahi lagta (which toh I know you won't show but things like that). Seeing her accepting her feelings and getting happy for their reciprocation, her complex relationship with Jalal, etc. Like I want her to appear more relatable because it will enhance the story more than anything. Yeh toh sirf mere suggestion tha baaki toh you guys are A1 writers :")
Also, PLEASE no complications from Jalal. Uske liye koi achi girl introduce karo please so that we don't see irrational pratu anymore ;)
Baaki toh I loved the story and I can't wait for the next updates.
P.S: Mera comment dekhke shock se don't passout coz hum abhi zinda hae :p :p
Aayu baby
DeleteIt's so good to see you after such a long time. Missed you yaar
Ajabde shows herself to be perfect to the world but only khaas people are able to see her flaws. She doesn't show her weaknesses, flaws that easily
Praja at the moment are not sure if it is love or mere infactuation so aage read karna padega to know if they realise it or not
Jalal ki toh Ruqqaiya hai re - we mentioned her in the previous update. Jalal is our cupid
Am so so happy tumhaara comment padhke...keep in touch
Love
WOW,,, WOW.,, WOW!!!!!!!! DIS PART WAS FABULOUS....... JEALOUS PRATAP WAZ GOOD...... LOVED THEIR DANCE PART........ I M LOVING D FACT DAT NOW,,,, AJABDE IZ ALSO GETTING JEALOUS SEEING PRATAP FIRLTING WID OTHER GALS!!!!!!! ND FINALLY THE KISS WAS SUPERB ,,, FANTASTIC !!!!! BY FAR MINE FAVORITE CHAPTER...... HOPEFULLY NOW WE GET TO READ MORE ROMANCE BETWEEN PRAJA
ReplyDeleteHi Shradha
DeleteGlad to know you enjoyed the update :)
Suru will be happy to know ki this your fav chapter as well
Love
lovelly part waiting for next
ReplyDeleteThank you!!
DeleteAahahaaa so this is Suranya's favorite part!!! Indeed full of surprises, jealousy, passion, lust and deep love as well. It was totally unnerving when she right away apologized for her behaviour. N he submitted himself completely when said he needed that. But right after that he had to rub her off by telling her I KNOW YOUR SECRET ABOUT MY BROWNIES IN THE KITCHEN...
ReplyDeleteJalal my man you are a true frnd. U know what they need and U take them in that direction.
For Praja here RAVISHING seems to be their word... Either of them is looking ravishing or they are having a ravishing salsa dance like one body one soul.... Pratap you want her to laugh that carefree laughter with you! Now tell me is kissing someone passionately and surprisingly in the washroom going to earn you that laughter?? Or that hot salsa dance was to get you that laughter?? I think you confused her with the move in washroom after taking those 2 steps back after the dance! Either of you come out clean with your feelings before it's too late...
Excited for what happens next...
Yes my favorite part!!! Who wants laughter when passion takes over! Am also waiting to write add and alter the next part Sujata ji :)
DeleteSuju di
DeleteThe star for this update is Suru sundari, the way she added the feelings and set the temperature rising for this update I mean I was blown away while reading it
You know I told her I should have made her my editor long back- she has this midas touch that literally takes the updates to higher grounds where to be hones I personally couldn't have taken it
Feelings bhi aayegi saamne but thoda intezaar after all I love tadpaana especially jahan Pratu ka ho sawaal :P
Am so so happy that you enjoyed the update di :)
Blush blush
DeleteWhat an update girls...!!!
ReplyDeleteAjab is a rockstar too...! the way she shared sizzling chemistry with Jalal...he he.!
And that passionate breathtaking salsa...PrAja stole the show...!
So jealousy is taking a turn...!!
Haaye...! How deeply they affect each other...!! drunk khadus kunwar...confrontation of feelings...!
PrAja r simply perfect together... Living and defining Completeness...!!!
Just loved this part...! Waiting for more...!!
MaDiee
Hey
DeleteThank you so much
Ajabde steals the show with everyone...she's like water har rang mein dhal jaati
Jealousy is a good thing :P
Glad you enjoyed it
Love
And you stole Royal Accident ka line yaha omg har jagah dhaal jaati hoon! Am like water ❤
DeleteWhat an update girls...!!!
ReplyDeleteAjab is a rockstar too...! the way she shared sizzling chemistry with Jalal...he he.!
And that passionate breathtaking salsa...PrAja stole the show...!
So jealousy is taking a turn...!!
Haaye...! How deeply they affect each other...!! drunk khadus kunwar...confrontation of feelings...!
PrAja r simply perfect together... Living and defining Completeness...!!!
Just loved this part...! Waiting for more...!!
MaDiee
Thank you!!
Deletewaitingg for next
ReplyDeleteworking on it
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