Perfect Rider
Pratap went
running to the stable ground only to find Chetak’s place empty. He looked
everywhere but couldn’t find a trace of him so he decided to call the cops when
Heer came with a puja thaal; she had gone to the nearby temple alone as Shakti
was still asleep. Seeing the servants and Pratap searching frantically she went
to call Shakti from his slumber, a little worried. A few moments later Shakti
joined them searching the orchard’s for his Dadabhai’s lost friend.
“Chetak aise
kaise jaa sakta hai?” Shakti pondered “He never gets out on his own and is
extremely well mannered. Kisiko ride bhi toh nahi karne deta na...” but it was
Heer who pointed them in the direction of the answer....
Chetak came
into view with his silky white mane flying wild with the wind and riding him
with ease and a smile adorning her face was none other than Ajabde Punwar aka Musibat.
Pratap’s eyes widened as he saw her hair tied in a ponytail, dressed in riding
habit with the boots, she was a vision that made his heart stop for a minute.
All her curves were highlighted in the riding attire and the sheen of sweat
only enhanced her appeal, she looked utterly ravishing on top of Chetak. A
small gasp passed everyone’s mouth as Heer stared at Pratap for reaction. A
smile curved her lips watching him stare at the scene wide eyed, impressed?
“I can’t
believe it!” Shakti found voice first. “Chetak ne Ajabde ko ride karne diya aur
mujhe kick maarta hai jab bhi I go near him! But main toh bhai hoon na inka...”he
sulked like a baby while Ajabde got down and Heer seemed to feel a sudden rush
of excitement when she saw Pratap not even reacting to Shakti’s voice as he
stared at the scene.
Ajabde
walked towards them adorning a hapy smile with Chetak’s reins in her hands, “I
must say Kunwarsa aapka Chetak aapki tarah Kharus nahi hai.” She said rather
plainly. “He’s such a fine gentleman. Haina Chetu?” She gently patted his mane
making him neigh and shake his head.
Never in his
life Pratap thought he would see a day when he would be jealous of someone for
sharing Chetak’s attention and here he was feeling a tad bit jealous of the
girl who had turned his world upside down.
Post
breakfast Pratap walked in the corridor lost in his own thoughts of Musibat.
She had managed to make Chetak fall for him because everyone knew that Chetak
was not a friendly horse he would rather kick than let someone ride him and
today he had allowed Musibat to ride him and take him out of his favourite spot
in the stables. He decided to go meet Chetak when he saw the servants were
doing set-up of the photoshoot trial placing the props. He stared from a
distance rather reluctantly when he realised that one was having trouble with
the prop so he walked up to the person and helped him out. The servant was
shocked and apologised only to have Pratap shake his head and smile.
“That was
perfect!” Jalal spoke up smiling as he looked into his camera “I must say
Kunwarsa you are a natural!”
Aafat buttering kyun kar raha Pratap acknowledged his presence and
decided to leave. Jalal saw Kunwar Pratap leave and decided to check out
whether the man actually cared for Ajabde or not. Something in him told that
these two had a lot in them.
“Arey
Kunwarsa aap nahi rukenge for photoshoot?” he asked making Pratap stare at him
like he was some puzzle. Pratap was about to respond when Ajabde came dressed
in a pair of simple denim shorts and a white tee that had a graphiti in the
centre of a Rajasthani woman with the words Internet Famous written in perfect
calligraphy, her hair were tied in a messy bun. Pratap’s heart skipped and
seemed to suddenly feel a kick of pain as she brushed past his shoulder only to
stand close to Jalal with an endearing smile which was replied with a charming
smile as they stared at each other. Suddenly Pratap felt like a third wheel and
walked away abruptly ignoring Jalal and Ajabde’s presence.
Ajabde
followed behind the Kharus Kunwar who was by now ignoring her calls and even
increased his pace a little. A stubborn Ajabdeh was irked by his odd behaviour
by now and was determined to find out about his “problemo”. Ever since Jalal
had arrived Kharus was behaving like a brat and his behaviour was getting on
her nerves so when she saw him enter his study she knew what her next step
would be. Pratap stood near the window trying to calm himself down when he
heard the doors of the study shut behind him.
“Maine bola
na ki mujhe….” He snapped.
“I don’t
care tum kya chaahte ho!”
Her voice
made him turn around and for a minute Pratap got scared for he was all alone in
the study with none other than Musibat aka Ajabde Punwar whose eyes resembled a tigress’. She confidently walked
up to him and pressed her finger on his chest, making his heart skip an odd
beat before it thumped faster.
“What the
hell!” He found voice unsure whether it shook a little.
“Baat Karo.”
“Listen
you... you....” He avoided eye contact as she looked angry and took two steps
away from her scent and touch as she lost her cool.
“Khudko
samjhte kya ho? Koi aise behave karta hai? I mean bada bolte ho Kunwar ho that
you follow a royal code of conduct and aise behave kar rahe ho jaise koi 5 saal
ka baccha karta hai. What the hell is wrong with you? Jalal is here to give
Heer and Shakti a memorable photoshoot and tum Dadabhai ho unke...samajh mein
aata hai matlab Dadabhai ka? Tumhaare
bina kya karenge dono shoot? You know what main hi paagal hoon jo tumko invite
karne aayi, rehne do mat aao hamesha ki tarah sirf apne baare mein socho after
all you can only do that....”
She turned
and walked out without looking back but not before closing the door with a loud
thud that shook the vase kept on the side stool. She took a moment and breathed
in to cool herself down before joining the others as she wanted the shoot to be
perfect for Heer and Shakti. She
considered Heer as a younger sister and wanted to give her all the happiness in
the world!
Agar meri choti behen hoti toh bilkul
Heer jaisi hoti haina Maasa? She thought to herself with a smile as she saw Jalal
instruct Heer who sat looking like the perfect bride on the couch while Shakti
stood beside her looking a little bored of the instructions. She joined them
and became Jalal’s assistant helping out Heer with the dress, adjusting props
and doing poses with Jalal to make it easier for the couple to follow. An hour
later Shakti and Ajabde sat on the grass extremely exhausted while Heer sat on the
couch with her legs tucked underneath the heavy dress looking at the pictures
along with Jalal. She looked satisfied much to Shakti and Ajabde’s
satisfaction. Both Shakti and Ajabde were feeling hungry so when the smell of
freshly baked brownies reached them they stood up only to see a sight no one
was prepared for.
Kunwar
Pratap Singh walked in with his shirt sleeves folded holding a heavy
intricately carved tray that carried the plate with the freshly baked ....
“Brownies!!!
“ Shakti ran like a kid to his brother and picked up one and took a bite, “ouch
ohh...hot…it’s hot and so yummy!! I love you Dadabhai” He hugged like a kid
makin Heer and Jalal smile at them.
Pratap
laughed seeing his younger brother’s antics as he kept the tray on a small
stool that Jalal had moved for him. “Thanks man”
he said as he offered him the brownies. Jalal took a bite and was lost in the
chocolatey gooey goodness of the brownie.
“I have
personally never tasted such amazing brownies. Kunwarsa” he addressed Pratap; “I
want to kiss the chef who made these yummy delicacies for us.”
“Phir toh
kar lijiye Dadabhai ko kiss Bhaijaan because yeh brownies Dadabhai ne banaai
hai for sure!” Shakti said with his mouth full making both Heer and Pratap
shake their heads at him.
“Ab Dadabhai
hoon iska matlab yehi hua na ki tumhaare aur Heer ka poora dhyaan mujhe rakhna
hoga” he added staring at the girl who was still whete she stood, a little in
awe of this avatar, “waise bhi I know my
responsibilities acchi tarah se...” made her look away as he smiled inwardly.
“Jija aapne
toh brownie nahi liya” Heer asked Ajabde who had discreetly kept the brownie
back on the plate after she heard Kharus Kunwar’s dialogues. “I’m not hungry
Heer you guys enjoy I’m going to my room.” Her frown didn’t escape Jalal’s eyes
though as he stared at Kunwar Pratap.
Pratap saw
her retreating figure as his failure.He frowned only to realize Jalal staring
at him.He had baked the brownies hoping to make it even with Musibat. She was
right, he was behaving like a bratty toddler so he decided to do the one thing
he knew would be appreciated the most... he cooked. Heer loved baked goods,
Shakti would eat anything as far as his Dadabhai made it and he had seen with
his very own two eyes Ajabde Punwar devouring down chocolates so he chose to
make chocolate brownies. As soon as he had placed the fresh brownies on the
plate he was sure that no one would be able to deny them but he had forgotten
that musibat was an entire different species.
So lost he
was in his thoughts that he didn’t realise when Jalal had moved closer to him.
“Kunwarsa...”
he breathed down his ear as he placed a kiss on his cheeks. “Thank you for the
amazing brownies.” He walked away as Shakti laughed while Heer giggled and
Pratap shook his head in shock, yeh aafat
kahin gay toh nahi? I’ll maintain mera distance isse!
Later Pratap
walked towards the stable with a smile on his face as he had seen something
that had made him feel like he felt when he held an award every time.
He was walking towards the kitchen
thinking about a plan to get Musibat to eat some of the brownies,he couldn’t
lose. As he was passing by her room he frowned to find it empty. She had chosen
the room closest to the kitchen because she sometimes would get hungry in the
middle of the night or get cravings for snacks at odd hours so she wanted
access to the pantry. All of a sudden Pratap walked quickly towards the kitchen
and hid behind one of the pillars, he looked through the decorative mirror that
was giving him the complete view of the kitchen and ofcourse his Musibat!
Ajabde Punwar sat on the counter
devouring brownies, her hands, mouth, shirt everything was stained with the
gooey chocolate. The smile she wore made him happy.
“Mmmmm this is so yummy” she moaned
as she took another bite of the brownie. “Maan gaye kharus Kunwar you can
actually cook “she spoke out loud “kaash tum apne mood swings ka bhi kuch kar
lete... You could have been a complete package!”
it was amazing update
ReplyDeleteThank you!!
ReplyDeleteHi welcome back..hope u enjoyed ur trip
ReplyDeleteAnd a very happy new year😊.updates..hmmm from where should I start ...jealous pratap😍 akbar u r too gud ..u shud be a jodi maker
Were brownies specially made for ajab? Hmmm he is still not getting it.its like a competition for him.."I can't lose" even ajab is getting affected by his behaviour. .koi nhi time ke sath feelings realise ho jayengi
Waiting for heated up jealousy 😎nd raja n rani solankhi's jasoosi
Hi Divya
DeleteI had tons of fun in the trip
Glad you are enjoying the updates
Brownies in a way made especially for her- to show ki he knows apna duties
Jasoosi aayegi aage
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Just imagine..!! How stunning must be the sight with Ajab on Chetu..!?.. Jo kunwar sahab ki nazare na hat rahi unse...!!
ReplyDeleteKunwarsa don't get jealous with Ur Musibat..u have to share everything with her..so be it ur Chetak's attention...nahi..?
It seems he don't want anyone close to her, be it Aafat or Chetak...except.....?
Brownies...!!! Yummies...!!!
He's the best Dadabhai...! Khadus kunwar's cook avatar earned him nothing less than an award...!!! Even I'm smiling like I won the same...!!
Ajab unhe tum complete kar do...
PrAlal prem activated...ha ha...!!!
What will happen when Heer's parents reach farmhouse..?
Looking forward for what next...
MaDiee
Hey
DeletePralal Prem toh activate hona hi tha after all hum pralal ke deewaane hain :P
Ajab on Chetak is a sight for sore eyes....
Sabko brownies pasand aa rahe
Aage ka jaane ke liye - keep reading!!!
Love
DIS PART WAZ AMAZIING......... I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletePRAJA'S NOK-JHOK WAZ SOO CUTE.......
Wow...
ReplyDeleteWow...
ReplyDeleteThank you
DeleteGarima U just made the fantasy come to life!!! Pratap on Chetak n looking all ravishing is sooo much like always; But Ajabde on Chetak riding comfortably enjoying herself and WITHOUT PRATAP was too good of a fantasy to come true!!!
ReplyDeleteSome how I feel Mr Pratap who is close to Chetak might have shared a few things about Miss Musibat as he already is captive in her thoughts only... N Chetak being the smartest in the lot must have guesses that his Pratap has finally found his match n so must not have opposed Ajab.
Pratap n Ajabde compliment each other so well.N the effect they hold on each other is devilish!! N Jalal has been reading between the lines ever since he came... He is pushing the right buttons to ge tthe desired reactions from both. Ajab in shorts n White T shirt with a messy bun sure must be looking like a magnet but Pratap did u expect her to come n be with you when you are acing so PRICEY??? She was here for the photo shoot n thats what she was helping with!! N Y do u find Jalal to even be an competition when u yourself made it clear that it was all an act for HeerTi!! N please see Ajab immediately followed u to give you a piece of her mind n that too so intimidatingly... Maybe she wanted you there n just maybe you too could have had a snap of yours where words could had flown through eyes...
N the last part where he was trying to have ek teer se 3 nishane wherein 2 were bang on the 3rd one was rt on spot;) Zara dialogue hi kam marte to she would had actualy had the brownie with everyone. But come to think of it that how on earth would you have heard those words from her, or seen her moan while eating the brownie without a care in the world or seen her getting all dirty while eating those brownies...
Vaise Musibat janti hai ke Mr Kharus itna nahi bilkul bura nahi hai but thats the only way she could get a reaction out of you!!!
Garima BAdly waiting for next one....
Your comments are why we update haina Garima?
DeleteOh my God! This is exactly why we wait for your comment! You read between the lines and we so so love to see your POV! Itna bada comment dil khush ho gaya
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