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Early morning saw Sajja Bai
ji as well as Rani Meera at the Jag mandir praying for the children’s success.
They both offered their puja thaal to the pandit ji and as soon as their
prayers were over they rushed back to the hotel. As they were in a hurry they
were not able to see the girl who kneeled in front of the Lord her eyes closed,
hands folded as she prayed ,
“May the best person win the
project and I hope Heer and Pratap do amazingly well. Heer ko thoda zyaada
dhyaan dena bhagwaan ji- meri behen ka pehla major presentation hai” she smiled
as she recalled Heer’s smiling face.
Heer stood all ready for the
presentation, dressed in a royal blue saree and pearl set with the royal brooch
of her family as an heirloom she looked every bit the Rajkumari she was, she
could feel her heart throb in her veins. Today was a very important day not
only for her but also for her family, she could not fail today.
Heer her mother’s voice
called out as she walked in with her father following behind, “Prasad lijiye”
as she did her aarti.
Her father smiled, “border
par nahi bhej rahe hain hum Heer ko Ranisa” he teased his wife who looked at him,
“Border se bhi zyaada dangerous jagah jaa rahi hain”, she did nazar uttaran for
her daughter
“Aaj ka result jo bhi ho
Heer, remember aapne humaara sar uccha kiya hai. WE are very proud of you.”
Heer hugged her mother first then her father who echoed his wife’s sentiments
as well.
“I’m proud of you beta. Aapke
saare ancestors bhi aaj proud honge ki unki beti ne itne bade project ke final
contenders mein Solankhini family ka name pauchaaya.”
As they walked out one of the
servers approached them with a dahi shakar as well as a hand written note.
“Hukum, yeh Rajkumari Heer
baisa ke liye hai” he said looking at Raja Hemant who nodded his head. His wife
asked, “kisne bheja hai yeh?”
The server’s response had
them smiling, “Ranisa yeh Ajabde Baisa ne bhijwaaya hai and order diye hain ki
aap humaare saamne dahi sakar Rajkumari ji ko khila dein. Aaj unka bahut
important presentation hai”
Rani Meera smiled, “Chaliye
Heer apni jija ki baat maan lijiye” she fed her the dahi sakar and Heer like a
kid on Christmas morning opened Ajabde’s letter to her
Meri pyaari Heer
Today is a very important day tumhaare liye. This
presentation is a very important thing and I know you are carrying a huge
burden on your shoulders just remember ki tum Rajkumari Heer Kanwar Solankhini
ho who is one of the most loved girl and a Rajputani. Aaj give your best,
presentation ko apna banake dena- aaj koi bandish nahi hai tum par. I want you
to be the business woman you are Rajkumari sa.
I’m praying for your victory and hamesha yaad rakhna
tumhaari Jija is always there for you. Agar darr lage toh bas apne Daata ke
taraf dekhna- saare darr bhaag jaayenge
Tumhaari Ajabde Jija.
With a new boost of
confidence Heer walked towards the Swaroop Sagar boardroom where she was about
to give the best presentation of her life.
Rani Sajja ran from one room
to the other making sure both her sons had everything they required. She was a
jittery mother whose sons were about to appear for their Maths board exam. The
boys came out dressed looking every bit of the young men they were she smiled
as she saw them dressed formally – they took her blessings as she handed them
the Prasad. The server approached them as well
“Ma’am Ajabde baisa ne
bhijwaaya hai- dahi sakar” making all three stare at the server with surprise
clearly visible on their faces
Sajja Baisa smiled as she
gave both the boys a spoon full of dahi sakar and followed her sons to the
boardroom. She was going to sit with Rani Meera and watch the presentations
with her- as there were only 3 major presentations followed by discussions on
the many ways other businesses could collaborate with them over the project and
then the press conference. She sat by Rani Meera and looked at Heer who looked
confident and ready. Sajja Bai smiled as both the ladies whispered, “Ajabde
Baisa”
The Rathores took their place
with Rao Maldev in the front with Jhalim Singh following behind him with the
rest of the family falling behind. The Sisodias were also in presence as Udai
Singh wanted to contribute to the project and it was one of the ways he could
see his sons even if from a distance. The Rathores were first to present
followed by the Solankhini and then the Songara group.
The jury sat in the front
with mikes and stationary tidily kept on the table with their name cards in the
front. The projector was set-up on the left of the room with space left for the
person to move around, the projector’s remote was placed in the front with
spare kept as back-up. Jhalim Singh looked at the crowd his eyes resting on the
trio sitting in the front- Kunwar Pratap Singh Songara, his younger brother
Shakti Singh Songara and his fiance Heer Kanwar Solankhini. He had to admit the
Songara heir was quite good in his work and he was only competitor they would
face because Heer Kanwar Solankhini was a newbie and had no idea what she had
gotten herself into- her place was at home taking care of the kitchen and
babies and not in the boardroom. He never understood why his own sister Phool
Kanwar was involved in business decisions but he never questioned his elders
only did as asked of him and once the Rathores were declared as the winner he
would make sure he was the sole head of the project and that Jagmal could go
and fall in some ditch.
The presentation began with
Jhalim Singh full of himself went on a self-praising monologue of the Rathores
and their background. Ajabde was watching it from the Udai Singh boardroom and
her eyes widened listening to the man
“Yeh Jhalim Singh is so full
of himself, he feels ki surname mein Rathore hi kaafi hai” she looked at the
jury who did not show any emotion on their face but her gaze landed on her
father and she knew he was bored.
Everyone clapped with the end
of the presentation and Jhalim Singh walked back making way for Heer. Ajabde
closed her eyes as she uttered a prayer for the girl who had become her younger
sister. Heer looked at the crowd her heart beating way too fast for her liking
and then remembered her Jija’s words, she looked at her parents, Manjhali Maa,
Shakti and Dadabhai who gave her a thumbs up and began.
“Honourable jury members
The Historical Tourist
Destination Project is a golden opportunity for the State and for us to leave a
mark upon the globe. We come from a rich traditional and cultural background
where our ancestors fought invaders and protected our motherland. We belong to
the land of Maharani Padmawati who symbolises the strength we have within us.
We want to promote not only the famous places that were mentioned earlier. I
want to mention here, significant lesser places like Chavand, Kelwa, Bhilwara which
leave their mark in history. Developing them as tourism destinations will help
the locals there with there livelihood. Before me Mr Rathore made a really good
point talking about the financial influx this project would bring into the
state. We, The Solankhini group wishes to have that influx of wealth reach the
common man- the man who toils day after day on the dry earth and makes it
fertile, the ladies who sew and make some of the most renowned handicrafts that
people from around the globe take home as décor. As my mentor my Daata told me
For us what matters is the effect it will have on the
common people living here and how we can help them in the most effective way”
The jury looks impressed
Ajabde thought as she wiped a tear that fell from her eyes. Her little sister
was doing a fabulous job as she walked everyone through their presentation. The
Solankhini’s had focused on the handicrafts as well as the different festivals
one could promote to generate tourism even during the off-seasons. Everyone was
stunned that the jury asked questions from her and not the Rathores. Heer gave
them all the answers impressing them with her knowledge.
Raja Hemant Solankhini looked
proudly as a father and teacher as everyone clapped for Heer at the end of the
presentation. She had everyone glued to the presentation throughout and focused
on their main topics. He was a very proud father today.
“Well done you made all of us
proud” Pratap hugged Heer as she sat by her father. Shakti had done the set-up
as Pratap walked to him; both the brothers were going to do the presentation
together. Rawatji and Jaimal ji both were waiting for this very moment- to see
late Maharanisa Jaiwanta Bai’s sons in actions. Rawatji had kept a tab on the
boys and he was well aware of the personal issues they had gone through but
today as he saw Pratap he realised he was seeing the old Pratap back.
Raoji nodded his head for
them to begin but Pratap looked at the jury then at the audience- his Manjhali
Maa, Heer and her parents and then at his brother. He shut the MacBook down
earning gasps from everyone, Shakti knew his brother was a one man army about
take everyone down so sat down, Rawatji smiled, his Pratap was about to impress
them. Ajabde stared at Pratap’s antics eyes wide open.
Kharus what are you doing? She thought as she kept on mumbling soft
prayers for his success
“I know everyone must be
surprised” Pratap began “on why I closed my MacBook as the presentation is in
there but let’s be all very honest- most of our presentations are similar
especially in the financial section. We know that this project will bring in
development and financial help. So the question we need to ask ourselves is why
is this project so important?” He stopped at the pin drop silence.
“The very name says it, Historical Tourist Destination project.
We are going to promote our state as not just any tourist destination but the
place where history lives, the state in whose air one breathes the numerous
folktales that talk of our brave Rajputana, of the brave warriors who laid down
their lives, of the women who chose to jump in the sacred fire than surrender
to the enemies. “
The jury especially Rao
Ramrakh leaned in to listen to the young man in front of him whose views
matched those of his daughter,
Pratap had everyone’s
attention including the girl, who sat admiring him as he spoke,
“Meri Ranimaa would always
tell me
Kya hai Hindustan ka Itihas Rajputo ke bina,
Aur kya hoga Rajasthan ka itihas Mewar Bina?”
“This
project is our golden opportunity to share with the world the rich heritage we
have been blessed with. Our past has laid the foundation for our present and we
have the responsibility as Rajputs to make our future- to uphold all the
traditions, pride, dignity and honour we have received from our ancestors.”
For 2minutes
there was silence but it was Rawatji along with Jaimal ji and Raoji who stood up and
clapped followed by everyone else. Rani Sajja Bai ji smiled as she saw her sons
greet everyone with polite smiles. She was proud of both her sons as well as
the daughter who made her head held high today. Everyone proceeded to the lawns
for the break as after the break the winner would be announced. She walked out
with her family and loved ones happy and not at all worried about the decision-
in her eyes her children had won.
lovelyy part waiting for next asap
ReplyDeleteThank you!!
DeleteHaiiii!! loved the speech by Jalam Singh ;)
ReplyDeleteAjab tum to abhi bhi nahi aayi samne, but I understand the reason!!! So sweet of her to send the shagun ka dahi saakar to both Heer and Pratap. Pratap note bhej ke tumko dinner date pe bula sakti hai to Dahi saakar me itna kya surprise hai??? Dont u dare question Ajabs capability to be present everywhere for YOU!!!
Why wasnt Phool in the presentation or she was but was the most insignificant one?? And the Solankinis n Songaras I strongly feel will get the project jointly...
N Rawatji aisa kyu pratit ho raha hai ke Pratap n Ajab ke old connect (with respect to Jaiwanta) ko ujagar karne me aapka amulya yogdan rehne wala hai!! making things more emotional here onwards!!
But I want equal amount of Romance n some Bajao of the one and only JALAM SINGH;))
Suju di
DeleteAjab itni jakdi nahi aayegi- she'll take her time
Pratap's learning the fact that Ajabde is everywhere jahan woh hoga wahan woh bhi hogi
Phool's the insignificant one di. She'll come to but later not now
Rawatji to reveal the connection- we'll see :P
romance bharpur milega
It indeed is a show time...!!!
ReplyDeleteVery well written...!!
So sweet of Ajab to send both of them shaguni wishes... Her prayers always works...!
Am loving this note system... Brings special touch to the feelings...!
All details of preps, looks, presentations...awesome..! What an Atmosphere...!!
Had jitters like I still have at the time of my presentations...!!
Arre Jhalim Singh, apne sath sath Kuch project ke baare mein bhi bata hi dete...Sir utha ke...!
Heer impressed and Pratap just nailed it...! Superb...!!
Happy and looking forward for the reunion...!
MaDiee
Hey MaDiee
DeleteThank you so much!!
I agree the notes add the midas touch to the entire thing.
Jhalim Singh bechaare ko kuch na aata except for his name and sar utha ke lol
Reunion will come soon
glad you liked it
PS: Loved your OS
Thank you so much dear...!!
DeleteReally means a lot...!
It was nice update....waiting for the next update to know who is the winner
ReplyDeleteThank you Jaimy!!
DeleteSUCH A LOVELY UPDATE.......... AWESOME!!!!!! EAGERLY WAITING TO KNOW WHO WILL GRAB THE PROJECT!!!!!!!!! ND ALSO XCITED FOR THE RE-UNION OF AJABDE WID ALL...... WHEN WILL PHOOL COME???????
ReplyDeleteThank you Shradha
DeletePhool will make her appearance towards the end
Loved the presentations ....some of the lines were amazing
ReplyDelete'Borders se bhi zada dangerous jagah ja rahi hai'
'Sajjabai ji running around like a mother whose child is to appear for maths board exam'😂
And then ranima's lines on rajputana...very well thought lines
Great yaar...u both will be very good if any chance is there to give presentation on rajputs😊
Hey does pratap knows ajab's identity or not? Nd if not then how come he or for that matter heer and Shakti too didn't react on her presence at the hotel
Waiting for the next😊
Hey Divya
DeleteThank you!!
Presentation on Rajputs- Suru will excel in it.. Am going to provide the background score and probably eat all t he yummy khaana :P
Identity part will be revealed thoda thoda slowly slowly :D
Well they both want their Dadabhai and Jija to get together so their reactions will be different
waitinggg for next
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